At last it's finished.!!!!
It took like 10 month or something to finish this.. Theese last 5 days were killing me. I wanted to finish it at last so I've been working until 2AM every day.. Not to mention the pain I was going trough when game was finished and I had to search for mistakes.. I tryed to go trough the game like 30 times, but every time there was some wierd thing that I had to fix to be able to go further.. *sights*
SO i still don't know if there is some spelling mistakes or text doesn't make sence because of auto correction or something else, but I really woun't go another 10 times trough it, it's just too much..
Anyway hope you'll enjoy playing it..
If there is some glitches please notify me..
Be carefull with choices cause if you answer correctly on one guy you might lose points with other one. So choose from the begginig whitch one are you going after and don't be afraid to make an "enemy" out of the guy you didn't choose..
And yea, this game is a little bit different from my previous ones, just sayin though..
Yay, I still can't calm down, I can't belive it's finished.. At last..!!!!
An ye I know such an "original" title for it.. But I suck at making titles....
Ohhh, just remembered there's no background music.!!! But well you'll survive it, I belive in you..
Now there is background music.. Just press to play it in lover right corner.. ^.^
*sights* Just so you know the"best ending" is longer and better than endings with not enaugh points.. ^^'
DIDNT BELIVE THIS AND DELETED IT WITHOUT EVEN READING THE WHOLE THING! A FEW DAYS LATER ON THE MONDAY NIGHT SHE WAS WOKEN UP BYE LOUDE FOOTSTEPS AND HEAVY BREETHING THERE WAS CLARISSA STANDING THERE WITH A HUGE KNIFE AND WELL JENNY IS HISTORY NOW.
ONLY SENT IT TO 5 PEOPLE CUZ HE THOUGHT HED BE SAFE AND IT WAS PROBLY JUST A JOKE BUT OH HOW RONG WAS HE! HE DIED THE NEXT NIGHT ON MONDAY AND ILL TELL YA NOW IT WASNT PRETTY(JUST CUZ HE SENT FIVE HE DIDNT COMPLETE THE TASK)
SENT IT TO 19 PEOPLE SHE THOUGHT IT WAS CLOSE ENOUGH AND WOULD DO BUT SHE WAS WRONG SHE DIED THAT NIGHT ON A MONDAY AND ONCE AGAIN IT WASNT
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a monday night at 12:00a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death.
Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if u copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes u will have the best day of ur life tomorrow. u will either get kissed or asked out, if u break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room tonight. in 53 mins someone will say i love you or im sorry
How many endings are there? Really enjoyed this game!!
Umm 3 for each guy so that makes it 6 in total..
And thank you.
Right, he's the character that I'm most proud of, kinda..
Then I replayed it again and didn't get the best ending. Damn.
Then I finally got the best ending and I was really happy, he's really sweet!
Then I played Reino and I noticed that if I right click I can go back to change my choices (but I have to go back and choose the right one twice to get back the points I lost whoops) so I didn't have to play it multiple times, yay! And I loved him more than Hiroto, sigh. <3
What bothers me most is how Hiroto's jealous even when you have NO POINTS WHATSOEVER with him. Like, not as in I dislike the game, I just dislike that side of the character (which isn't bad, it's always good to have more sides of a character, some to love and some to hate! I really like it more ). I was just like "yo, chillax, I don't mind what he did at all, don't need to freak out like that and go punch him oh my god". But yeah, I really liked it!
There are some typos here and there, but it's generally okay - you can read and understand just fine.
I also like the art! And the story! Good job!
I made Reino more to my liking too, shh don't tell anyone..
It's like even if you don't have points with him, because of the story line he still likes you it's just that he doesn't love you so he won't choose to be with you.. Something like that.. ^^"
lol about punching scene I just had to put in some "drama".. Since the 1st day I started making this game I just knew that there will be scene like that..
Soz about that, I'm trying to improve my English.. ^^"
And thank you very much.
And yeah, I noticed that! I really liked that. I mean, it's a bit weird when you're not gaining any points and you're just seemingly pissing him off, because really, what do you like about me Reino if I piss you off constantly but it's rather cute nonetheless! I also don't have to worry about the fact that the guy seemed to hate my guts and then by the end of the game he fell in love with me and it doesn't seem that rushed, you know? That's what I like about dating games. No rush. uwu
Well, can't say I didn't like the punch scene at first, haha. When I was on Hiroto's path I was like "YEAH PUNCH THE SMUG OUT OF HIS FACE, HIROTO! Butpleasedon'tgetfiredforme." xD But yeah, it makes sense! I mean, it's obvious there's some kind of tension between them since the start, so it was inevitable, lol.
I also really liked when they seem to band together to protect me from the journalist That was really cute!
And don't worry! I understand what it's like, I'm not English myself and it took me a lot of time to get used to English and be able to make as less typos as possible. Also, the game was understandable so it wasn't that big of a deal. Maybe next time ask an English friend if they can help you search for typos and correct them? It can help when you don't know if something is wrong or not too, so you can learn more as well
And no problem! ^^
I dunno why I just always like that guy who is mean to you, and you are pissing him off in the end falls for ya, so that's why he is this way.. Mh, I think it's better than when you start playing and the guy is already so deeply in love, I think it's kinda weird, though I think that in one of my old games there could be something like that.. And maybe I will make games with character like even though I don't like it myself..
Haha.. Poor Reino.. Someone rooting for him to get his ass kicked..
Mhh, even they can work together to get rid of one more rival.. And of course to protect their "loved one", gawd that sounds cheesy..
Mmmmmm, I don'r really have English friend.. ^^" Well I only know one guy from america and he's teaching me English by correcting my mistakes, but I wouldn't send him all the long text of game to check. But anyways I'm learning, and I would like to think that I'm getting better with every game I make..
Yeah, I guess it's really cute seeing how they end up loving you when they started off hating you, lol. Idk, I really like it or, well, at least I like it in games, lol. Don't think I'd have the same reaction irl!
Yeah, well, it's just really cute seeing that how they react to everything you do is influenced by the fact that they already like you!
And haha, yeah, sorry Reino! You know, when you're not trying to get him to like you, that's kind of a jerk move though, I have a reason for cheering for Hiroto!
That really sounds cheesy, but cheesy is cute imho! When I saw them hiding behind the bushes I laughed and thought it was incredibly cute!
I see, I see! Well, it's already good that you have someone willing to help you out And anyway, you can ask somewhere on internet (maybe tumblr, if you have one? or here on deviantart too I guess) if someone would be up to help you find typos and stuff. I think it's common to search for beta-testers that do this kind of work
Next time, maybe, I can try to help you out myself? If you don't find someone English to help you, that is. It's better to have someone that actually speaks the language since they were born to help you out, haha.
But childhood friend is different, I mean he knows you for ages and has a reason for loving you, but there in game is a guy who you just met and it's like a love of a 1st sight, then it's still creepy I think.. ^^"
Right.. Like "how dare you do that to me, I don't even like you.. "..
Mhh, yep but at same time, I'm chatting on DA with some people who isn't English and they're also really bad at English and I think that it decreases my progress in language.. ^^" Nope I don't have tumblr.. I dunno where to find beta-tester who would check my cheesy games, even more so since my next game wil be like really weird not like normal dating games.. Well basicly I already have someone who will be my beta-tester, but she can't correct the text though.. And as for now I don't even know how much time it will take for me to start making next game, cause I had dialogs ready for all guys but I lost them, and I can't make myself make them, pus they were so good, that I can't possibly make something like that again.. But in overall of course it woul e good if you would check it since your english is better than mine anyway..
Well, I guess it depends on how he'd act with you, considering you don't know each other. Like, if he acts like you've known each other forever or like he's allowed to be creepy or overly friendly just because they 'fell in love at first sight' then yeah, it'd be creepy. It depends on how he'd act!
Well, it can't decrease your progress! But don't worry, haha. It took me a long time to progress in the language, it's no easy task. I started learning English in school since I was young, and I was always in love with it so it was easier for me to learn, so I guess that helped as well. It took me years to get to this point though, so don't worry, it's understandable!
Well, you can post something here on deviantart or something. Dunno, I don't really use anything outside of tumblr, haha... ''orz sorry.
Well, can't she write down, either on paper or on her computer, the mistakes and report them to you so you can correct them? Unless she can't do that, because if you don't mean that I'm not sure I can help either ^^'' I'd just help you find the mistakes and point them out so you can correct them, but hey, if that's of help as well, I'd love to help out and check whatever you'll make.
And don't worry about weird. I've played, loved and cried to a dating game with pigeons and murder in them. I'm pretty sure it won't be easy to weird me out, haha.
And it's a shame you lost the dialogs, I'm really sorry about that And well, you can't say that you can't make something like that again - you can't know until you try! You can write down whatever you can remember, and for the rest, you may even come up with something even better, but hey, if you let it drag you down you'll never know if you will :3
True, but I was thinking more on that version when he would do that. Like openly show that he loves and want's to be with ya and that he fell in love with 1st sight.. ^^"
I also love English and at school it was one of my fav lessons, mainly this is the reason why I know the language like I do now, cause in school usually I already knew everything they was about to teach us, and in my last school english teacher was awefull she kept teaching us the same thing over and over, plus she often made dictation and her talking in english was awefull so all words sounded the same, and because of that I stopped going to thous lessons. Plus even if you did task 100% correct you sill couldn't get higher than 8.
I don't think that posting it on DA would help much, since most people here are from other countries writig in English, plus that would cause the story be out before game is..
Trust me, no she can't, her English isn't good enough to point out mistakes. And that would be a huge help actually. I got the idea, if you would show me ehere are the sitakes I could show them to that person who is english, I mean correcting some sentences would kill him..
With pigeons.? What is that game.? Though I think I have heard of it, is it that game when it's easy to die if you make wrong choices.?
The thing is it was sucha long time ago that I don't remember anything. Though one thing is good that I have one of old dialogs, it isn't the correct one, but at least in it are the basic things that should be there so I just need to correct them a little.. Though it's only one.. ^^"
That game is great!
Do I must get all points to take best ending?
Well they both are supposed to care about you equally I think.. Only their way of showing it is different..
And thank you werry much for your comment, I really apreciate it.. Arigatou.. ^_^
Mm nope. Sorry if I'm mistaking (since I don't remember that well anymore) but if I remember correctly then you have to get 200 or 190 points to get best ending, but in total you can get 240 points.
Girl: Do u even like me?
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years